fix: proofread Algebraic Geometry II: Affine Schemes part - #336
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Proofread the six chapters of the "Algebraic Geometry II: Affine Schemes" part (sheaves, localization, spec-zariski, spec-sheaf, spec-examples, mor-scheme), correcting typos, grammar, and small mathematical slips. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01JiWD2kTJcNfuLWc1AKKa41
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Proofreading pass over the Algebraic Geometry II: Affine Schemes part (part of the #315 campaign), covering the six chapters:
sheaves,localization,spec-zariski,spec-sheaf,spec-examples,mor-scheme.Most fixes are minor typos and grammar. A few small mathematical/notational corrections are worth calling out:
Math / calculation fixes
spec-sheaf.tex(gyrotop problem): the scheme was writtenSpec ℂ[x,y,z]/(xy,z), but that collapsesz=0everywhere and is inconsistent with the given solution (which usesA_z ≅ k[z,z⁻¹], a punctured line, and(xz,yz)). Corrected to(xz,yz)— the plane-plus-axis "top" shape the problem intends.spec-sheaf.tex(stalks-are-localizations proof): the injectivity step hadh(g₁f₂ − f₂g₁) = 0, butg₁f₂ − f₂g₁ ≡ 0identically. Corrected toh(f₁g₂ − f₂g₁) = 0(the genuine cross-multiplication), and tightened "some nonzeroh" to "someh ∉ 𝔭" so the subsequentD(h)step is valid.spec-zariski.tex(Krull dimension example): the length-1 chain forℂ[x,y]/(y−x²)was written(x,y) ⊊ (y−x²), which is the reversed (and false) inclusion. Corrected to(y−x²) ⊊ (x,y).spec-examples.tex: evaluating20/19at(7)gives4 (mod 7), not3(since19≡5,20≡6,6·5⁻¹ ≡ 6·3 ≡ 4).localization.tex:A_(x) = {f/g : g(0)≠0}was described as "the Laurent series"; it is actually the rational functions with no pole at the origin (Laurent series/polynomials are the other localization). Reworded.mor-scheme.tex: generalt↦t²remark said(x−a)maps to(y−f(y)); should be(y−f(a)).Notation fixes
spec-zariski.tex:f ∈ ℂ→f ∈ Afor a polynomial;A = Spec ℤ→A = ℤ(with "function onSpec A").spec-sheaf.tex:f ∈ Spec A→f ∈ A;𝒪_{Spec X,(x)}→𝒪_{X,(x)}(doubleSpec); residue fieldA/𝔪→R/𝔪;U ∋ m→U ∋ 𝔪.mor-scheme.tex: several𝒪_{Spec X}/𝒪_{Spec Y}(doubleSpecon spacesX,Y) →𝒪_X/𝒪_Y;k[y]→ℂ[y];f^♯→π^♯andf^{pre}→π^{pre}.sheaves.tex: category-lovers aside wrote𝒮ℱ_p(U); corrected to𝒮ℱ(U)/𝒮ℱ_p.Typos / grammar
sheaves.tex: "thrown way" → "thrown away"; "a open set" → "an open set".localization.tex: "also explain" → "explains"; "those elements of those elements" → "those elements".spec-zariski.tex: "as it always moving" → "as it is always moving"; "oldgeometric'' " → "oldgeometric'' points"; "is the called" → "is then called the"; "considering the space" → "consider the space".spec-examples.tex: "are don't look" → "don't look"; "only way" → "only one way"; "is the again" → "is again"; "How it does differ" → "How does it differ";pmod{x-1,y-2}→pmod{x-1,y+2}; "un-bending the hyperbola" → "un-bending the parabola" (parabola section); "(0) is longer prime" → "no longer prime"; "deleted it" → "deleted"; "draw the visualize" → "visualize"; "this point has only one closed point" → "this space".spec-sheaf.tex: "if and only of" → "if and only if".mor-scheme.tex: "give a define" → "define"; "didn't to specify" → "didn't have to specify"; "two construction gives" → "two constructions give"; "well-definced" → "well-defined".🤖 Generated with Claude Code
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