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fix: proofread Algebraic Topology I: Homotopy part - #332

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Proofreading pass over the Algebraic Topology I: Homotopy part (issue #315), covering the three chapters:

  • tex/topology/constructions.tex (Some topological constructions)
  • tex/topology/fundamental-group.tex (Fundamental groups)
  • tex/topology/cover-project.tex (Covering projections)

All findings were minor (typos, grammar, one incorrect parenthetical). No large mathematical errors were found; the homotopy-groups-of-spheres table $\pi_n(S^m)$ was cross-checked and is correct.

Changes

  • constructions.tex: added a missing period after "welding its boundary onto $\mathbb{CP}^{n-1}$".
  • fundamental-group.tex: corrected "$S^1$ (the boundary of the unit circle)" → "(the unit circle)" — $S^1$ is the unit circle (it's the boundary of the unit disk, not of a circle).
  • fundamental-group.tex: "generated by this loop $a$ and $b$ (and its inverses)" → "these loops $a$ and $b$ (and their inverses)".
  • fundamental-group.tex: "instead of merely assigns some group" → "instead of merely assigning some group".
  • cover-project.tex: fixed typo in codomain $\pi_1(Y_0, y_0)$$\pi_1(Y, y_0)$.
  • cover-project.tex: "the lifting criteria is trivially satisfied" → "criterion" (singular).
  • cover-project.tex: dropped a redundant trailing $\mathbb{Z}$ in "additive group structure $\mathbb{Z}$".

Part of the proofreading campaign (#315).

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Minor corrections across the three chapters of the Algebraic Topology I
part (some topological constructions, fundamental groups, covering
projections):

- constructions: add missing period after "welding its boundary onto
  $\CP^{n-1}$".
- fundamental-group: correct "$S^1$ (the boundary of the unit circle)" to
  "(the unit circle)" -- $S^1$ is the unit circle itself.
- fundamental-group: "this loop $a$ and $b$ (and its inverses)" ->
  "these loops $a$ and $b$ (and their inverses)".
- fundamental-group: "instead of merely assigns" -> "instead of merely
  assigning".
- cover-project: fix typo $\pi_1(Y_0, y_0)$ -> $\pi_1(Y, y_0)$.
- cover-project: "the lifting criteria is" -> "the lifting criterion is".
- cover-project: drop redundant trailing $\ZZ$ in "additive group
  structure $\ZZ$".

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01HDuMAvLEs4gH1VwDvWp4xr
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