More tweaks...

I think the extra "and" before use cases was/is necessary because submission is not part of the list of things. I split the last sentence into two which I think makes it easier to read.

Author: zimeon

source/_posts/2014-06-01-drafts-released.md

@@ -18,11 +18,11 @@ A complete list of the changes can be found on the IIIF website:
  * [Image API 2.0 Change Log](/api/image/2.0/change-log.html)
  * [Presentation API 2.0 Change Log](/api/presentation/2.0/change-log.html)
 
-We welcome your feedback, questions, use cases, and encourage you to submit them to the [IIIF Discussion Listserv](mailto:{{ site.data.organization.email }}). While we intend to keep the drafts open for comment until the beginning of August, with the goal of final release in September, we would appreciate feedback early in order to work on and gain consensus for any necessary changes.
+We welcome your feedback, questions, and use cases, and encourage you to submit them to the [IIIF Discussion Listserv](mailto:{{ site.data.organization.email }}). Drafts will be kept open for comment until the beginning of August, with the goal of final release in September. However, we would appreciate feedback early in order to work on and gain consensus for any necessary changes.
 
 Sincerely,
 
-The IIIF Image and Presentation API Editors
+The IIIF Image and Presentation API Editors:
 Michael Appleby
 Robert Sanderson
 Stuart Snydman